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untitled/unwritten.. lol
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02-16-04, 12:11 AM
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Menik
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This was ok.....the structure in this was alright.....the piece could have been longer it just seemed so short lol.....flow in this was ok, it fell off at some points....vocab in this could be up'd though....but keep at it.
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