wow...Jon definitely had the wordplay section of this battle.....but iLL threw hard punches and he had the personals and structure part of this battle.....jon u can cut the bolding also....and the quotes arent too necessary...i know how it though...i used to do that alot too......here's the line that won it to me though...
Quote:
From Ill:
...You messed wit the wrong guy, like dough im 'widespread'//
...Your shits fed, ya like a John Doe, only exist in peoples head//
...You aint got what it takes, in face you lack the requirements//
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^nice....the dough line at the end was kinda expected...but it was good also...
Punches - iLL
Personals - iLL...the name disses
Opener - iLL
Closer - iLL
Wordplay - Jon....work on making harder punches...
Structure - iLL
Vote - iLL for having harder punches and a hard hitting verse overall.....Jon u had a decent verse.....but u need work on making ur punches more effective feel me....no hate....
peace