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Old 02-16-04, 05:02 AM   #4
.iLL.
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From: spokane
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TiLLEyEDiE ~

Ima Son This Bitch So Stop Ya Rhyme
Ima Spank This Fool Call Me Father Time
kinda a weak opener, but so so..
Ill Dis- Member You, Ya First Lost Indeed
You Got Banned 4885 Soon To Be Banned IP
first line was nice, but that 'banned IP' line is over used as fuck!
Soo Shut Up.. In A Instant.. He'll Be Like A Flash
Ima Silence You Timeless.. Quicker Then A Dash
ehhh...weak..
Last Friday Was Bad? The 13th Was A Missprint
September 18... It Should Have No Longer Existance
hm..ok
Punch Me....... I Dare Ya...... See What Happens
3 Crews in A Week? Ill Leave You Crewless Like Trapt Wit
not a bad bar, good flow
Fuckin Face It.. Time You Lost Cant Ya See?
Or Are Ya Eyes Tearing Trying To Catch Up With Me..
ehh..weak closer, coulda made this better..

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Timeless ~

your gonna beat me in this battle.. lol, all jokes aside
1 win, soon to be 4 losses... do ya call that asian pride
lol, nice opener
your rhyme didnt glitter...and i didnt see any asian stars
and your bars aint infectious,but still ya infected with sars
asian stars? ehh..ok...scars is overplayed as a mutherfucker
yea i've been populalating 3 crews, coz i'm a crew flow breeder
i left a certain crew, coz its shit, with asians as co-leaders
eh, nice nice..
you barely pass the standerds of an mcee, where as i'm class
i know ya got a lot of asian pride, but get your dick from jins ass
lol! nice jin line..
spit to hit with it, with words, when I spit profound verbs and nouns
Herbs get pound with a renowned winning streak and curved up frown
first line had useless filler multis (spit, hit, it) ...
just like Hiroshima,i be droping bombs and blowin japanise kids off the map
even tho this wenrnt my best rap, its KO,coz i aint losein to a jap
eh eh..ok, not too bad of a closer..

Overall ~ I think that Timeless took this shit, wasnt the greatest battle, TiLL, i've seen you come with better shit..must be an off day or something..anyways, Time's opener and closer were better, along with the majority of his punches. Even though they were asian jokes as expected, they were creative (jin line).

Vote: Timeless
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well anyways.. RB's better.