This was just aiight.....the way this is written...it seems like you havent been rapping for too long...all i can really say is keep practicing....

this is supposed to be a battle rhyme right?...."ILL JUST STICK WIT THE STICKS IM ALL MADDEN WIT THE SHOW"
you have to come harder than that man....but you had a couple cool lines like "ILL JUST KEEP MOVIN POUNDS OF DRO
ILL JUST KEEP WINNIN BATTLES NO MATTER HOW MANY ROUNDS IT GO"...and "IM DOIN DIRT BUT STILL MANAGE TO KEEP THE JEANS CLEAN"...with a battle rhyme...just come with the illest that you can possibly come up with...im out

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