View Single Post
Old 02-16-04, 06:44 AM   #5
Casual
[/merk material]
 
Posts: 1,124
IP:

Till - didnt flow.. the vocab was too limited.. consistant punches an they were actually quite original.. but they were all stand-alone.. u need to have a kinda thread runnin thru to hold it all together.. the Trapt Wit line was very weak.. not effective as a punch in the slightest.. an it didnt rhyme wiv its accompanyin line.. dont throw other peoples names in to ya verse unless its witty, personal and/or relevant.. not a bad verse overall but lacked creativity an flow..

Timeless - alot more personal.. some creative punches an ya flow didnt fall off.. watch for the played 'sars' an 'jins ass' lines tho.. ya 'Hiroshima' line was prolly the dopest of the battle.. nice witty verse an some cool concepts.. props..

VoTe = Timeless
__________________
- Deja Vu -
remember us?