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Old 02-16-04, 07:50 AM   #6
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From: spokane
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Unwritten ~

i spit, rip, then i vanish........... posting fake votes in the ballot///
im getting votes from illtalic....using eleborate tactics to become a HAZARD fanatic//
not a bad use of multis, nice opener
what a faggot, tryin to front, imma leave you soaked like a pump in a swamp///
then make "iLLtalic" bleed, like ink from a "font"//
hmm..ok, ok..i feel ya here..
your avatar says "really is that gully"//
he probably ment to type "REALLY IM UGLY"//
kinda the corny humor..so so
you got nothing, like the "projects" im buring your "garbage" fast///
really fag, i wouldnt let you "blow me" if your were an atomic blast///
this kids a "JOKE", he should change his name from illtalic to "COMIC" sans
very creative closer, liked the last line, lol

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illtalic ~

The Chemist already dropped u .. now im makin sure ya really hurt
the past is the same as ya future.. dead an buried beneath the dirt…
ehh, wasnt feeling this..
Style resembles ya heroes.. a long forgotten boy band
I’ll call u Justin.. cos outta Sync ya clapped by ya own hand…
lol!
So drop ya 2 cents.. ya can even drop nickels an dimes
But like big nosed coke addicts I’ll simply hoover ya lines…
wasnt feelin it...sorta...wack
Cos Illtalic’s the Harold Shipman of RB.. ‘Dr Death’ will do fine
im performin talent transplants.. so now ya ass is really mine…
good general diss..not a personal though..
The votes'll never be in ur favor kid.. no one understands ya vibe
cos scratchin at the surface of talent DOES NOT make u a Scribe...
hmmmm....so so at best..
Nicca I'll plant ya face on the side of the road.. so ya constantly see the curb
Breedin slurs.. call this bitch a Root.. he has to elevate jus to be a Herb...
second line was good lol

Damn, overall, this was actually close. But but but...reading it over again, I liked Unwritten's approach better. You were both equal with flow, structure, illtalic..you spit any multis? maybe in the closer, might be stretching it...

Anyways, Ima have to give this to Unwritten, but overall, this was a really good battle, you 2 should consider a rematch...

Vote ~ Unwritten
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well anyways.. RB's better.