Thread: e.coli vs roux
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Old 02-16-04, 08:16 AM   #8
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E.coli - nice metas.. made fa creative punches.. a few played lines but not enuff to drag ya verse down.. that 'exlax' line didnt make sense either.. but other than that good solid verse.. consistant an nice use of personals..

Roux - pretty nice vocab an concepts wiv regards ya metas.. but ya didnt turn them into decent punches.. the whole verse was kinda general an some punches were forced at best.. u need to get more personal about ya opponent.. then ull elevate alot more..

VoTe = e.coli

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