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Old 02-16-04, 09:03 AM   #9
Ambitious
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this was interesting.....flow was very good....had some funny, and meaningfull lines...
structure was good....metas were good...wordplay decent....
lmao at that prime minister line....and the France one .. lol ..
but decent piece here...okay consistancy.....must'a been fun writing this.! ...
good job keep it up
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