Se7en - some pretty impressive concepts.. harder punches.. but ya vocab kinda put ya flow off.. some stretched lines made the personals lose a bit of force.. but a cool opener an a closer that got a chuckle.. shockin imagery!

Toke - lose the dashes kid.. thas pre-skool style.. an try gettin more personal about ya opponent.. u had a fair bit of jus general filler in there.. cut the uneccesary an it'll make ya verse harder hittin.. but still a solid verse..

VoTe = Se7en

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698

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