Se7en ~ Nice shit man, this is actually the firt of your battles I read...pretty damn impressive man..no offense to your opponent, but you made him look like...a herb..I agree with illtalic on the opener at least, dope drop..
Toke ~ Your rhyme seemed...forced..you tried way to hard on your multies and i'd comment on your dashes thing but its been beaten into the ground..you aint bad man, just need to fix a little bitta shit and you'll do fine.
Vote~ Se7en
HoLLa BacK ... thanks..
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