Lyrical MC ~ I would have to agree wit testament, your structure needs to be fixed, not only for reading wise, but to have a fresher look..I enjoyed your verse, but some of your shit was wack (verbal bubble closer..ehh) .. BUT, it was enough.
Bakn ~ Your drop was kinda choppy bro, i had to re-read some of the lines to get it right..flow was aiight i guess, but the punches man, just wasnt feeling them..I think you coulda done better..
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drop it in a second, yur keyboard is doin damage ta peoples brains,
im losin more cells readin yur shit den watchin priests rapin in chains
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as my lyrics impail Rillist flow takes to de-rail,
my rhymes leave him blind,so i spit it in brail
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