LMAO

.ill. im sorry to say man but
damn... you got murdered bro..

punches: riz....For-The-Thrill" leave him "Bloody"
like in "Horror-Films" After this Battle He'll be *Scared
to Write Again* so he wont "Record-his-Will"!// 1

personals: riz....u gettin "Walked All Over" like the
"Terf-or-the-Pavement" i "Bring so Much Heat" u
would think i "Worship-Satan"!!//5

flow ill: his wasnt stretched but lacked alot of shit

metas riz: i aint Some1 u wanna be "Lurkin-in-a-Maze-With"
so why u "HIDIN, PUSSY" like "Girlfriends-Who-Aint-Shavin"!!//

overall rizzo

lose the "" ** bolds illtalics and shit...makes your verse
look messy

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