little faggot fuck this newb....no wins about to be beat,
cause with i record like 0-4..even your avy's callin "defeat",
^aright personal here drop the uneeded words like fagot and shit...
you aint shit..already been banned probally for nicking my ryhmes,
cause your like a telephone advicer the way....
........................your studying my lines.........
^aright this is good wordplay a nice meta4...good punch....nice bar..reachin a little..
little coward smash this prick up untill hes truely devoured,
my rhymes are sweet...leave your's to be tangy and soured,
^2nd line is all filler firstl line is a multi and weak punch ..bad bar...
so fuck this prick..spit on his lip so he can taste my flow,
cause to be honest ive seen colder shit..from an ice show...
^ok this is a strong finish good wordplay and a nice punch..first line was kind of filler again overall a decent verse....


ive seen alot of rhymes but you've got to be the worst in flows
your rhymes read like something a retarted person wrote
^ok setup to a decent punch not a bad opener....
your new to rb but already your weakness is old
kid your raps slow and like a "consitaped persons bowel" movements they dont flow
^stretched second line OK metaphor...good punch...
and kid you cant find a trace of intelligence out of ya head
your iq's lower than scores of retard that took and algebra test
^meh you already used the retard concept so you need to get a new one..bad bar..
yeah only god can judge you and we know the verdict in that
it reads.. guilty on all counts of being wack!
^this is simplistic vocab and a weak punch....you just basically called him whack..been done...
just give up rap dude no one respects your crap
look in the dictionary youll find your picture under the word wack!
^yea again this is the same concept as before....so no...

Overall judge takes it for more creative/ less repetitive concepts....pz