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This was really really good, you write like mystically its tight. Uh it was a nice read and all, I mean it had meaning, but it seemed like your flow wasnt always the same seemed like it got a little longer as time went on but maybe thats just me...anyways there really wasnt much wrong with this piece it was nice keep it up man..
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