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Drop Of Genius
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IP:
Erm I wont shoot ya but....
This was poor
Your structure seriously needs sortin out, as does your rhymin, imagination and originality....basically everythin.
You need a lot of practice to elevate but the more you practice the better you'll get.
Drop a comment on mine...link is in my sig
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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002
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