Geeeeeeezus christ, this was some long ass shit =P
But a good paiting u pictured, .. w/ a dope story line!..kept me reading, .. & ur flowwas on point, due the inners & multisnot much but they were there when needed, .

She licked her lips, their fullness bleeding to her clenching teeth, she let go of the words
Watching the woman, the blonde woman in the window… Cinderella naked, laughing
She gave herself to that moment, and stepped off the sonic pounding stars shooting
As the little wisps of blossom engulfing lips, nipped the souls of her feet
A life fell into her open arms, and it wasn’t hers, she watched a continuity of a dreams cheat


Liked this, .. very very dope, & its a solid read.. + its dope it enjoyed me, props.

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