Originally Posted by MC PINACLE

The oasis of smiles, and thorns burned to grounds sipped her life away
In nothingness, I exist… she thought, but the words came slow, and her rope began to fray

Good imaginery...Good storytelling...I found the flow awkward, but it tended to straighten out later on...Very long piece...I did skip a bit of it...But had to return to get the full effect. What voacab! Nice piece...9/10