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Old 02-16-04, 02:23 PM   #9
Tyler Durden
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hmm...close battle here
007 came nice..I liked ya opener alot
Very creative..but then it fell off
after that ya closer was tha only good one
Tha middle just seemed like filler to me..

Ambitious..ya first 6 lines were good
Then you fell off also..tha rest was filler
Then ya closer was good too..
Up to date wordplay..nice

so 8 good lines is better than 4..good battle

v/ Ambitious