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Old 02-16-04, 02:24 PM   #10
Ambitious
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damn...john dough killed this kid with some pretty good punches.....
other than that i unno what else to say...
JD..structure was ok...metas were decent...wordplay to.....punches and attempted personals were good....hard hitting and consistant.....12/20

UNIT...YOU have good punches....they not direct tho....too much of bland statements...personals were blah....strcuture can use work....metas werent bad at all....but you gotta a few thigns to work on before you get elevated....wordplay was decent...nice battle here......10/20

vote - JD
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