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Old 02-16-04, 02:54 PM   #11
Bio*Chemist
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From: -In My Lab-
IP:

Break Down:

John Dough:

You came average..Punches were pare. Flow was on point
Vocabulary you lacked. Nothing that caught my eyes in this drop.
However You had nice structure which was an easy read.
And You had some personals, which were average however you were
Will aware that’s what one needs to use to win..Ur best line
“ICU prolly thinks he's a pimp..but tha girl in his avy..is his sister!”
An ok attemp
“I see you(I.C.U)..and ya wackness has over ridden ya body
U couldn't get a kick outta Units rhymes..if they were karate!”
Ok attempt





I.C.U unit: Ok your punches were definitely there however the concepts were
Very played. Your flow was their and an ok structure. Kept a somewhat easy
Read. Next time use you opponents name in the flow would be a sure victory
With good personals. Your fasv line.
“ill rip your "lungs" straight from your chest jus to show who is really breath taken”
The Bare -Lee line concept was used a lot..

I will give this vote to . John Dough only because I.C.U punch concepts were
Played…

No hate jus my opinion you both need to stay elevating
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