John Dough had some nice punches..good flow...rhymes weren't great tho..karate line was iight..the line dissin his avator was witty, not special tho...mercades line was decent wordplay but coulda been worded better...overall pretty nice verse..
Unit..u had some decent lines...the bruce lee line was pretty funny but that's about the only good line u had..u had some stretched lines too so ur flow was hard to catch....ur closer was really played too....elevate ur flow and try using wittier punches..the bruce lee line is a good start..
vote- Jon Dough
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