Mak:
punches were not there (definately need to work on these), flow was ok, structure was ok but needs changed, personals werent there, opener was crap, closer was crap as well, overall = shitty verse..

Best Lines:
none..


Out:
punches were nice, flow was nice, structure was nice, personals were awesome especially the 1st line (nice), opener was awesome, closer was wack (clearly, lol, but u didnt need it), overall = awesome verse..

Best Lines:
some one tell this cat tupacs dead - so makaveli can rest
get it through your head you not ill your only wack at best
^ the 1st line of this bar made me go 'oooooooooh!' for almost 4 seconds, nice..
my fucking computer froze after the page first loaded
so you would be merks like whoa, if i remembered what i wroted
^ nice, plain put, nice..
connect punchs to ya verse, like metal fist aimed at a magnet
your wackness is that attractive to my punching habbit
^ lol.. this was nice..

nice attempt by mak, just elevate and u'll get better..

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