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Old 02-16-04, 03:46 PM   #14
Bio*Chemist
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From: -In My Lab-
IP:

The best lines in my opinion :
“She fell and ran and fell again into the lifeless, collecting dirt
Blinded by mingling salt and water, bloody holes scraped into her skirt
Tripping through Snow Blvd, and landing up in pain and regret on White Ave.
She hid inside a trees deep wooden embrace, allowing her eyes to search its oaken figure for a secure cue”

Great story line pretty long it said short story …but I guess it was to you.
Nice very nice unique concepts. Reminds of dreams I have. I wonder do
You have abstract weird dreams? Anyways nice drop as usual keep it up
Peace.
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