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Flyweight
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IP:
Aight John Dough took this... Pretty nice verse
Intro:
"Most motherfuckas in frontlines..don't know how to battle
I'd show u an example..
But just peep Kay's verse..he's pretty much got it handeled"
^^ Decent punch
"I clipped this bitches wings..so how can u be a flyweight?
This fag was born a homo..And guess what..he'll die gay!"
^^ Ok
"U heard me right..ehh..theres lots of gays in Britsh Colombia
Ya one of em..
Ya partners gave up fingering u..now they double thumb ya!"
^^ Ehhh ... ok ... u prolly meeant thumbIN ya
"But ya elevating great kid..thats why u yelling out "save me!"
Cuz Kays going straight downward..even more than ya avy
^^ Good play on the avy
"3-0 rec? I'm impressed..but now you'll have one on tha left
Cuz if losses were God's grace..shit, I'm a leave ya ass blessed!"
^^ Ok
"Peep what Kay goes by,cuz tha way I win this,it'll be tha same
Punches hit u so hard..have u saying "I'm Kay Ohh""
^^ Nice idea but sounds like shit
Not a bad verse... some good punches stood out ... 81/100
Kayohh:
"Its tha K...A...Y, O, double H,
Don't take it out on me, that you recieved a, troubled rape;"
^^ wack - you're not Snoop Dogg
"From your, paps when you was younga, up the, ass with a cucumba,
I know its sick, ... but there's a, vast amount of wonda;"
^^ Seriously comon, this was so wack
"And, suspicion that you liked it, I mean I'm, thinkin u didnt fight it,
But enough with that, back to tha rap, and, flippin that vibe I kick;"
^^ Is this all good be this wack or are u gonna throw a punch?
"Despite his past, Ima whip his ass, fuckin him up with lyrical, tae kwon doe,
Now its Impossible to identify him, even on tha file he's, named "John Doe";"
^^ Still weak but atleast you attempted a personal
"I realize he's hit hard from, ma thesis, but ya better, believe this,
I'll mould this "Dough" inta cookie, crumble it up n jus eat, tha pieces;"
^^ You tried a personal again but it was wack
"I know he pre-writ it, but I wanna see it, mista "I'll key it in 10, minutes",
Your daddy started opennin ya up, but I as ya can see I jus, finished;"
^^ And you topped it off wit another stupid ass line
Kayohh needs to visit Wackness EMergency Center and learn how to throw punches and use metapphors/ personals... EVERYTHING
Vote - John Dough
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