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Old 02-16-04, 08:32 PM   #10
Intoxicated
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"You're Merked Again"



John Doughs verse:

U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!

^^ I dont get it sorry, prolly just me

Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!

^^ Nice

Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself

^^ Ok personal ...

That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!

^^ ok punch

Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..

^^ Pretty good punch again


Overall: Nothin standout, but constistant punches and personals


Kayohhs verse:

"Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;"

^^ Aight

"Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;"

^^ Aight, kinda corny

"Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;"

^^ The only good part about this bar was my name in it

"W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;"

^^ If it's true then it's a decent personal but if it's not - WACK

"He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;"

^^ Nice multis but not a very good bar, ok


John Dough had more hardhitting consistant punches... Kayohh did much better this time but he's still a lil bitch that got merked.... twice
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