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Intro sounds like your dying.
Your flow is way off, your bars are too long at points, your just spittin over a beat man, you not catchin a snare a hat or nuttin. No emotion, no delivery, etc.
elevate.
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.Soul-Full Beats.
Originally Posted by sdizzle
any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best
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