Aight listnin now.....i luv thiz beat.....wtf.....damn kid you soundin young az fuck....
thatz good tho, u startin young.....feelin yah wordz tho, some real shit....but yah needa up yah emotion and delivery a whooooooole lot....but you still young ( I assume) so you gotz time 2 elevate.....the 2nd cat juzt soundz wack tho...he tryna spit 2 fast and can't do it, he soundz young too tho...hard 2 understand some of the wordz....propz on the real shit tho
keep it up yo
and return the luv on my track below

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