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Old 02-16-04, 09:46 PM   #20
Brethren
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Punches: Lyrical, better overall punches, could use some elevation, but decent. None from Hit Man
Wordplay: Lyrical, this is where you excelled, some nice wordplay, Running back line.
Multis: Hit Man, this is all hit man had, just multis.
Personals: Neither, none from both
Opener: Lyrical, came with a punch
Closer: Lyrical, ended stronger

Vote - LyricallyAbusive

Decent wordplay, Hit man needs some elevation, make punches, don't sacrafice punches for multis.

Now hez signing a contract with the site...this wannab has jus resigned
Best line from Lyrical

Nothing quotable from Hit Man
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