shadow:
i cant tell the difrence if u a wanna be or if
u got a mentallity// cause i got hoes while
u still struglin to get some dough// u betta
work on ya flow cause the west coast
gonna put ya in cold snow// its like ime jin
and u the wanna be black vesion of slim
what am i saying u anit nuthin like eminem//
at least he got skill and i consida him ill
hommy u just got killed// you from nyc and
ime a south sida and ime eaven more proud
of biggie// he represents north i represent
south but itha way will bouth punch yo
mouth//
im not gunna bother breaking this down...the structure is horrible...so were the punches....keep elevating

mentality:
This kids weak....strugglin just to battle hard, i dismantle stars
You'll get convicted....on a bike, you just cant handle bars
your structure and flow aint that good either...punch was pretty nice tho

Im ill, hypnotize kids who have stopped and saw, jaws drop'd and awww's
Honesty, you? your like the lakers wit a budget cut, you just aint got tha balls
heh...this was aight....rhyming was nice

Just watch the reply, for your health, kids will drop concern, i'll pop this herb
Even if you spit with After Shave you still cant stop this burn
this was ok...a lil weak but it was decent at the same time

What a shame, this lame couldn’t bring game if he collabed with 50 cent in an arcade
Like a used copy of knockout kings your punches already been played, your outweighed
this punch coulda been so much more if u reworded it

Why you lyin to people and actin like your good
Cuz your losing more focus than a ford dealership in a high crime neighborhood
heh....liked this...


verdict: the choice is easy....mentality got this....didnt feel either structure...thought the lines were a bit stretched but its all good....

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