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Old 02-17-04, 12:56 AM   #24
ThAOnEFeMaLEe
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dope piece.. imagery was of the hook...multis were good. somewhat long but a good read. everything lead into the next line which gives the reader the urge to read on. every line had me hookes so i hada go on. i relli enjoyed the read one of the best yet.. keep creatin cuz ya writing is interesting
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