ok sdizzle

first tip : get in contact with someone who is willing to give you cool edit pro, so you can actually play the beat and rap to it.

Second tip: do not rap over your own beats, b/c your the only one that thinks they are hot. go download some beats and rap over them.

third tip: listen to someone elses beats. do you hear the "kick, Kick, snare......kick,snare" pattern? well yours goes "kick,snare,snare,snare,snare.......snare,snare" and that sounds shitty. go listen to some jam master jay beats (Run-DMC) and listen how the drums go. thats what a basic hip hop drum pattern should sound like.

Fourth and final tip: make a new alias, and start posting good beats with it. it seems like you got fruity loops, clicked a whole bunch of shit on each pattern, and saved it as mp3. it doesnt work that way. you have to feel the music man

and thats all i gotta say

as of right now your shit is garbage.....just another laugh for people at RB....

as of the future you could be making dope beats, if you just try

we all have to work our way up

it just seems as if your at the bottom of the hole