Ambitious - nice personal verse.. turned ya 'inside' knowledge into effective punches.. a few played/weak concepts i.e. 'dope' line but the rest was pretty consistant.. nice use of metas.. created some nice original concepts.. flow was smooth an easy to follow.. solid all round

menolin - nice opener.. personal an witty.. an u stayed like that thruout ya verse.. flow fell off a lil bit a one or two points cos of the structure but overall it was easy to follow.. ya punches were effective cos u used the personals more creatively an the structure emphasises the rite words.. the closer was also pretty coo.. nice personal an good imagery wiv the 'learnin curve'..

VoTe = menolin

Jus edges it for turnin his personals into more effective an witty punches.. hella close battle tho.. props to both of u..

Could both of drop a vote on this plz.. it needs respected heads to vote on it:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168

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