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Old 02-17-04, 10:37 AM   #25
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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technician
Here out of all the rappers, let me say....you far from wackest...
No where near the top though I use your name as target practice
not too bad, nice wordplay, 6/10

& with how hard you actin, you'll be the first to start the blacklist
Your verse so tactless, herbs shouldnt talk shit if they cant back it!
hardly hit, 3/10

When I unvail for you my new found skill it's like you lookin at an atlas.....
KOT bookin flights for passage but it's blind ambition like loosin ya glasses!
[bnice wordplay, 5/10[/b]

See theres skilled and novice and I think your confusin' the classes...
I'll abuse you with rachets, Tech give you battle scars bruises & bashes
blah, didnt hit, 3/10

You can't withstand consistant punishment like kids with short tempers...
Your the car that was totaled cause you were missin ur support fenders!
not too bad, 5/10

Not protected enough when subjected to such neglection of guts......
I'm progressin so much that aggression is rush I'm fetchin' your blood!
nah, just multies, 4/10

On Rb ur reflection is mud, nothin but dirt it was swept under the rug...
Son needs a hug, tough luck! my punches like somethin hit u & ur still wonderin what!
bad wording let you down, 5/10


overall 31/70


king of thievz
fucka Technician I molest writtenz...fuck ya style...
you ain't shit but a put on...it even sayz in ya custom title...
not too bad, wording let you down, 4/10

battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire...
ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire...
played, i heard the retire line before, 3/10

tell me how this Technician is gonna fix a full clip in the chest...
that will throw ya whole state back in time like Mitchell & Ness...
didnt hit, 3/10

fuck Chuck...to me ya nursery rhymez ain't nuttin' but Child's Play...
you ain't a rapper you're and "artist" in other wordz ya stylez gay...
bad wording, an concept wasnt too god, 3/10

what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me??????
I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's...
lol, pretty nice, 6/10

I'ma call you cherry cause my big gun has been fiendin' to pop you...
go door to door sellin' blowjobz then maybe I'ma have a reason to rob you...
gun lines are wack, an so was ur second, 3/10

I'ma kill you, go to ya funeral and start strippin' ya hearst...
when I tell my bitch to speak only then will you be spittin' ya verse...
second line could of been made better, but it was wack, 3/10



pverall 26/70
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