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Old 02-17-04, 10:50 AM   #12
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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illtalic
Im prolly jus battling the Leaders alias.. another pussy getting whored
Wits End raises the bar?? Wise only got in cos the WarLords were floored…
not too bad, 5/10

Like his title this fags hopes are -dashed-.. the unfortunate misfit in his crew
Misunderstood ‘ghost writin’.. to mean bars fa blind men ta walk-thru…
nice, hit hard, 6/10

Ya need ta forget ya voting rings an sad lil cliques.. ya led by a bitch
Makin Hottie a Wise leader.. first choice when it comes to handling dikks…
nice personal, hit hard, 7/10

Welcome to Elevated.. wait.. r u lost?? < same as battlin A.I’s Leader
Ya Theory’s in Kaos.. an more conFue-Xion’s bout to occur...
a good personal, 6/10

Pinned ya hopes on a dream.. an like Prom Nite cherries ya bout to get popped
The Wits beginning to End.. an A.I is big shots wiv nothing but hot drops…
wording, an concepts let you down, 5/10

Big names is all ya got.. in a crew made up of.. Oh.. I forgot!
Suppose I could get myself banned.. then you’ll recruit me fa top spot…
lol, nice, solid hit hard, 7/10

Prediction: when this coward finishes his verse an gets to postin
Its strait to AIM, pleadin: “I need the –Technician- in to fix the votin”…
nice closer, 7/10


overall 43/70


wise ways
Whoa Ill..ya crews faith in u..sad to say..is covered with holes
Ain't hard to tell..even ya own leader put me on top of tha polls
lol, nice opener, 7/10

This kid gets alot of ass..he's got a list of gays and boy skanks
I don't know whats dumber..
Christmas handeling money..or Ill with a picture of Loyld Banks!
..Arson Ill?
not too bad, wording let you down, 5/10

U coming at me with toy tanks & hitting me with plastic bullets
Asked Ill to carry some talent,but he got dropped trying to hold it
nice punch, 6/10

& U ain't naturally a herb.. so I guess I can't hold that against u.......but
Tha moment u click "post quick reply"..all of tha wackness hits u!
pretty witty, 7/10

To Ill beating someone good is like pussy,he don't know how it feel
Got sick peeps calling his crew fake..so he had to put "tha real deal"
not too bad, 6/10

& ya Loyld's got a lisp..except we can't understand it quite fully
I'm hearing "feel me & hold me"..when u say.."Is really that gully"!
i didnt really like this, 5/10

Like get'n contract papers for adoptions..I guarantee u total funding
Cuz fuck me spitting this shit to u..I just handed Illtalic his sonning!
not too bad, 6/10

overall 42/70
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