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Old 02-17-04, 10:50 AM   #13
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taciturn - eh.. didnt like any aspect of it.. u tried bein personal but jus came across as talkin bout nothin.. that 'blind spit' bar didnt mean anything so it doesnt come across as a punch.. rest of the verse was like that.. no lines were connectin..

Mentality - much better.. tho still a few played concepts.. ya personals were put into harder punches that were effective.. went a bit general at points an the flow was choppy.. but there were enuff nice metas an the punches were consistant enuff to win this..

VoTe - Mentality

Drop a vote on one of these plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096

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