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Old 02-17-04, 11:00 AM   #23
Mentality
Flyweight
 
Posts: 193
From: NY
IP:

aight illtalic got this for better punches and personals

ill-nice punches
good peronals
nice flow
good structure
nice openeing
i liked the closer
nice verse,very constant
8-10

unwritten-so so punches
no good personals
ok flow
didnt like the structure
opener was ok
closer was aight
dont bold ur shit,cap it or put those marks on ur punches
5-10

v/illtalic...for a better verse and punches