This was real good i though man...the imagery was sooo nice.....and the flow was a little shaky at times...but nontheless i could read it pretty fine...structure is so-so...but thats not the point in my eyes....ur vocabulary is good aswell...and thats a plus..i like good vocab...overall this peice was good...with some real nice imagery man...props..i give this a 8/10....stay up...

if u can..check out my peice....called " All Alone "

its as long as ur and worth the read....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114842

thanx homie...yep...

HoLLa....

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