This was a dope piece. Like edicius said.. Multis really enhance your verse as long as they aren't forced and they flow good. Vocab could be upped a bit in parts like Ed said. All in all this was a dope concept.. great story and you could tell you took your time on this one. Stay up.

-Token

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation