ite aines got this with most things,
specially punches they were cleaver here,
with very nice wordplay and also hit alot,
harder the true.........true your shit was ite,
but came to simple at punches your flow was coo and,
strcuture was ok but didnt hit hard man...l.soz,
aines man i liked your structure abit more but uit still ,
looks streched you need everyline to end on the same line,
and not go of like this

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but nice verse man.....................v-aines.