that was deep there...excellent piece...

A figure distantly appeared, Face nearly visible but the cloud interfered...
Mist covered the darkened road, the moonlight lit, then disappeared...

^ luv the wordplay there...

As he came within recognisable distance, His walk retained its consistence...
Was he real, Why was his appearance so surreal, did he have believable existence...?

^ once agen worplay was heavy...n deep aswell...

I’ve lead a life conscience of sin, So many events, Where do I begin...?
I’m already dead, you must be courageous & release my spirits within...
So many tears I shed, and in your life I can foresee so many fears ahead...

^ touching lines man...

An astounded presence overcame me, I looked straight into his eyes, He looked at me...
I didn’t realise that, by living a life free of sin, heaven for me he could guarantee...

^ whoa especially by living a life free of sin, heaven for me he could guarantee... sik!..

last verse was deep aswelll...

nice drop man...