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Old 02-17-04, 02:05 PM   #15
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Not a bad battle but aines took it for sure...

First Verse...wasn't bad but didn't really stay to complex or hold to many hard consistant punches try to grasp more personals they help

Second Verse...a lot more accademic more punches that week line was great...i actually liked that...a little more flow would be needed on some lines though...i felt you went off an on one your one punch that didn't really rhyme....but all in all good verse

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