This piece was in all right piece..........I can see your message an what your trying to get accross......Keep it up......try an keep your flow consistent.....an up your vocab a bit.......this message would be great if you took the time to elaborate more on it.......keep at it dawg! hit my latest open mic up man! Thanks.....keep it up...
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