Thread: She Sits, Alone
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Old 02-17-04, 03:06 PM   #6
ELEETE
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Originally Posted by THE DALABIL
"Trickling light in all directions, blinding eyes till day was done,
Over her shoulder she threw her dignity, her trust, her world, her love,
In actions unholy to the Lord, she was spat on from above," - This made the whole piece worth reading - 4real.


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