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Old 02-17-04, 03:29 PM   #13
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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From: UK
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rapping master
I got a heart full of pain, head full of stress
Head full of anger, held in my chest
not a punch, 1/10

And everything left’s a waste of time
I hate my rhymes, but hate everyone else’s more
didnt ryhme, not a punch, 0/10

I’m riding on the back of this pressure
Guessing that it’s better I can’t keep myself together
wtf???, 1/10

Because all of this stress gave me something to write on
The pain gave me something I could set my sights on
??? 1/10

Never forget the blood sweat and tears
The uphill struggle over years the fear and
you must of bit a topical, 1/10

Trash talking and the people it was to
And the people that started it just like you
or a poem, 1/10


overall, 6/10
and i was generous.


born to kill
Can't believe you have that name, don't ya hear the laughter...
It ain't my witty disses, it's cuz you think ya a Rapping Master!
not too bad, 5/10

Keeping everyone in stitches, this kid could should be an MD...
And must be a fag shoutin to the ladies: DON'T FUCK WITH ME.
lol, not too good again, 4/10

Come on, kid, ya from England, ain't nothin soulfull over there...
Ya too busy kissing royal ass, despite the fact it could use some Nair!
blah, 4/10

Cuz ya know Charles is skanked, the Prince ain't what he used ta be...
But Rapping Master don't mind, he's just trying to get at little Willie.*
lol, wack, 4/10

Come on man, let's end this before you even post, no need to bore...
And gimme my 5-0 KO, cuz yeah, bitch, I know the score.**
lol, you were right too, 5/10


overall 22/50

qithout a percentage needed really!!


plz drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114633
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