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Old 02-17-04, 04:22 PM   #15
Born To Kill
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I thought creativity and originality won this battle...
For Menolin.

The flow was all Ambitious...

Really nice.

But I feel it hurt ya punches.

Cuz what ya spit was pretty played.

The opener...that's how everyone starts dissing a crew.
By dissing them for letting you in. Played.

The "wouldn't be dope/joints" is also pretty played out.

Nice vocab, but again...
Done like the multi's...it hurt ya punches.
Ending shit with "benevolence" just doesn't come across hard.
(and yes I know the meaning!)

While Menolin threw shit I'd never seen before and that's rare to say.

"Second serving" had the personal...cool.

I'd go on, but really, to me, every thing was quotable except for that stupid 3 line "lame" bar. Just didn't like that.

Everything else was wittier, harder, and alot more creative.

So there.

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