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Wow...this was incredible..I can really feel this piece i've wanted to write something on this type of situation for a long time but I could never pull it off...but you did it very well.
the emotion in this was great...I felt every line. The imagery was good. But overly this was just a emotional piece...I felt I enjoyed this a lot because i've been in the same situation...very well done...you repped SF well for your first poetic piece.
Good job
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