This was a good piece, reminded me of a few people I knew, they would tell me shit, and it would bother me and shit, but they got through it and are strong now. Bullying is a piece of shit in high school, everyone goes through it and you just come out stronger and your words conveyed this meaning very well. Even though I don't like how you used the word fuck quite a bit that could of been worded better. But it just shows your emotion put into the piece. The flow was off and on a bit, and the vocab was pretty good. Overall a pretty good piece.

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