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Old 02-17-04, 04:39 PM   #1
Sharp
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Post Introduction: MC Sharp

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Yo everyone,


Er... Im new to this so go easy yo! Construction criticism more tha nwelcome. Enjoy!

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Ok, Ok, Someone shine me the light,
You know i just entered - not looking for a fight,
Im starting to like this place so i think i just might,
Make this site my home and visit each n every night/

Wondering now if the potential is within me,
To fix up look Sharp and become an MC,
For the very first time im giving this a go,
This is a test for my 'creativity' and 'flow'/

Shit now im nervous - am i gonna impress?
This my first lyric but is it making progress?
Yall got me dreaming of money and success,
This shit might just flop and cause me distress.../

So here i go with my first introduction,
You might like what i got, hoping for seduction,
All my life i been recieving to many instructions,
Time for me to put this shit into production/

Ok, Ok so every MC needs a name,
Meet me MC Sharp just seeking some fame,
I bet im not the first to make that claim,
Cant think of nothing better so fuck it - lets game/

Think i was inspired by eminem and 8 mile,
Big fan of his lyrics the guys got style,
Bet most of you hate him so dont go gettin hostile,
Then again hes premade bet he cant freestyle/

Oh goddamn look im all out of time,
Aint even got a minute to finish this rhyme,
Diss me, rate me, call my shit slime,
Im just spittin for a livin - aint no crime!

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