This was pretty dope.............your vocab is very extensive i can tell......i like the topic which was good.........i think i have to say the best thing was the vocab though......its what kept me reading.........your imagery was pretty good as well.......an i like the way you ended it with

RB…This Is Just Common Place…. Where I Stop in H.E.R Realm..
And Say Thank You To HIP HOP For Allowing Me to Conquer and Dwell…....

Only problem i saw is that the flow was a bit stretched at times...but i liked, it was dope...hit my latest open mic up on my sig.....