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Old 02-17-04, 05:05 PM   #15
Wise Mynd
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Sdizzle
u quenched my thirst like sprite during basketball
spitting me this Nuetured flow, its got no Balls~at~all
ok verse could of used maybe a multi in it
True Blue stepin with burnt ashes in a vase tryna URN-a-Win//
I'll burn-your-chin, make u turn-n-Cringe, then see your Sternum-Bend
good wordplay
u couldn't win if u bribe, even the desert thinks ur rhymes are dry
he went to newyork, massachusettes, and maine just to try (tri)
ok verse
after the murder took out his vocal cords, now hes the same voiceless corpse
looks like he still gets the monoploy award for gettin people the most board
good punch here


True Blue's Verse
My responce to anything you've got to say is not postive/
With a name like SDizzle what made you wanna spit/
wack punch
SDizzle you have no mental ability plain and simple/
You've dug yourself into a hole deeper then Mase's dimples/
ok....
For shizzle nizzle all you will get is my middle finger/
Your just a small dick trying to get a little bigger/
no good
You stepped up to the challenge but left yourself exposed/
DShizzle I'm throwing bows to dislocate your nose/
After this anything you reply won't make a blind bit of difference/
My words, my rymes, lines are enough to win this

Ok Sdizzle gets my vote with a way better verse i explained it in the verses so read carfully what i put in
hit this battle up with a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114985
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